91 Banana Road
Fruit valley
0000
13.3.2018
Dear Mum and Dad,
There were big lantern statues and blinking headbands on people's heads. Also I saw fun rides to ride on. I heard clusters of people talking and shouting all around the night markets that were selling lanterns. Also, I heard loud classic music. I could smell fresh air every where. There were the smell of fish and chips too. I felt the cold fresh wind blowing. The ground was hard and rocky as a rocky mountain. Also I felt my mum's nice warm hand. I tasted the water melon smoothie in my mouth. Also I tasted meat balls in my mouth too.
Where am I?
From,
Irene
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Reflection:
We have been learning to describe a setting by using our senses.
I enjoyed making people guess where I was.
Something I found tricky was coming up with a taste idea.
Next time Im going to try to add more detail.