Adding details

I am learning to add some detail to my writing.

The Lonely Big Blue Whale

One afternoon in the deep blue sea lived a lonely big blue whale. She had just one naughty friend. So she was searching for some good friends. The next week she had to tell some fish to be her friends.

I am good at writing more details in my story. I can make them more interesting by telling Mrs Mason more. This story is short but I can add more in other stories.