Non fiction books

I am learning to describe the features of a non-fiction text.

The book ‘The Biggest Land Animal” is a non-fiction text. I know it is non-fiction because:

Photos What type of pictures are in this book?	True photos
Index What does the index tell us?	The page numbers to find what you want to read.
Glossary What does the glossary tell us?	It tells us what the words are in the book.
Why do we read non-fiction books?	So we about things.
What have you learnt from reading this book?	About elephants.

It was a little bit hard to talk about non fiction books because I don't know how to describe them very well. I get some of my words mixed up with Korean words.

Adding details

I am learning to add some detail to my writing.

The Lonely Big Blue Whale

One afternoon in the deep blue sea lived a lonely big blue whale. She had just one naughty friend. So she was searching for some good friends. The next week she had to tell some fish to be her friends.

I am good at writing more details in my story. I can make them more interesting by telling Mrs Mason more. This story is short but I can add more in other stories.